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The Foreigner, Book Two
I met Mr. Okabayashi when stopping by his table at Wizard World Philadelphia 2019. Very friendly and happy to answer questions, I informed him Surreal ValeCity supports indie creators and features crowdfunding projects. What really caught the attention about The Foreigner is using an accountant for the main character. Ok, this one is very different from the start! Most people view accounting as a boring job. I have an excellent imagination, picturing throwing someone in that profession into an alternate reality. This has very serious possibilities!
Skipping the introduction video, Mr. Okabayashi provides samples of art and a great backstory from book 1. Including one of the kingdoms having a very unique army... Doing an excellent job of chronological order, art samples from Book Two are next! In true storyteller fashion, leaves us with questions that I can not wait to be answered. I have not even read Book One.
Gratitude and detailed cost breakdown:

Next up? Mr. Okabayashi seriously thanks everyone who backed Book One and made it a reality. He provides a great pie chart and details the budget / publishing house. Keeping it very brief, but professional. Ending this section with thanks to everyone involved with production.
Rewards:

Mr. Okabayashi not only provides a listing of rewards on the right sidebar, he goes into great detail in the main section. Scrolling towards the bottom, great visual examples of the rewards are provided. Including: images, breakdowns and more. He definitely provides well balanced and great rewards for every budget, literally ($1 and up!)
Winding it out...

The Foreigner, Book Two Kickstarter winds out with press samples / reviews of Book One. A brief 'About Me' section highlights all the serious work Mr. Okabayashi does as a freelancer (Marvel, Magic the Gathering and more!). He has no problem stating very realistic challenges faced. Challenges that everyone faces when on a deadline.

Overall Recommendation

This Kickstarter is one of the best crowdfunding projects I have seen! The presentation, while a bit long, is excellent. Each section gives enough detail to keep your interest and scrolling down. The chronological order makes it very easy to follow. You almost forget about the Rewards sidebar. Writing and storytelling are a major contribution to the overall flow. A well-balanced rewards section shows Mr. Okabayashi knows some people are on a very tight budget. Graphics / illustrations are thought out and well presented. Plus, the backstory / teasers have my interest very high. As stated, I have not even read the first book yet!

The Foreigner, Book Two has my highest recommendation for backing. Mr. Okabayashi placed a lot of time, thought and effort into creating not only a unique series, but Kickstarter.

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  • Surreal ValeCity online media
  • March 1 2021 edition
    • Gov Lamont Congratulates Dr Miguel Cardona
    • Gov Lamont Health Center Vaccine Allocations
    • Gov DeSantis Appoints 3 Enterprise Florida Board
    • Gov DeSantis Appoints Craig Mateer
    • Gov DeSantis Appoints 3 West Florida University
    • HR1 Poison Pill Crush Alternative Parties
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